Specifically mention transportation and/or the Transportation Security Administration (TSA) in the Counterterrorism goals, especially #1 (Counter malicious actors), #2 (Protect infrastructure), an...

ALTERNATIVE CT MISSION STATEMENT SUGGESTION: TO MOBILIZE A CONCERTED AMERICAN EFFORT TO COUNTER TERRORISM OR OTHER DELIBERATE ACTS OF DESTRUCTION OR SOCIETAL SABOTAGE IN ORDER TO PROTECT THE C...

The "goals" look more like aspirations than goals to me. To borrow from project management vernacular, goals should be SMART: Specific Measurable Attainable Realistic Time-based ...

The euphemism 'Man Made Hazards' as used in Goal 4 is very misleading. DHS does not have responsibility for preventing most of the real man made hazards that face our society. Global warming, toxi...

Vision statement needs to be written in a way that clearly states your objective and is also clearly understood by all who read it. Not completely sure that this is where natural disaters belongs a...

What are other attacks? Providing incentives; does this refer to grants? If not what does this refer to? Under Goals: #3 Prevent illicit access to and movement of materials and capabilitie...

Goals seem appropriate, but they should be more clearly written. Too many appear as though they were written by committee, which is a problem we all face. Indeed, it's the very problem you face in ...

Concur that the mission is not consistent with the title to the extent that it addresses natural disasters. Those references should be transfered to the Disasters section. Also, we would be bet...

Make it shorter, to the point, and free of what Peter Drucker calls a hero sandwich of good intentions, since natural disasters are out of the purview of counterterrorism and security management. ...